Wednesday, September 16, 2015

Week 4 Storytelling: Trouble in Middle Earth

On the eve of Rama's banishment, Sita was crushed. Through her sobs she begged and pleaded for Rama not to leave. "Why do you not just imprison that mad woman?" she cried. "My love," Rama replied, "I know that she is mad. This whole situation is mad, but I am a man of honor and will not disrespect the orders of my King". 

Trying to calm the nerves of his beloved Sita, Rama told her the tale of the noble Eomer and his dedication to the well-being of his people.  



Rohan, the Kingdom of Men, was once a majestic and noble land. Under the protection of King Théoden, the people lived in peace and harmony. However, the age of men was threatened by evil forces who had awakened from an extended period of dormancy. 

You see, in Middle Earth there lives not only men, but elves, dwarfs, wizards, and the dreaded orcs. The orcs were evil and slimy creatures. Bred solely for war, the orcs were a brutal race that sought to disrupt the peace that had swept across the vast lands of Middle Earth. Their master, the Dark Lord Sauron, was considered dead for many years. However, while everyone had forgotten his name, the Dark Lord had secretly been raising the most immense army the world had ever seen. With an army the likes of had never before been seen, the future of Middle Earth seemed dismal.

Another tool by which the Dark Lord carried out his mischief were his magical powers- unknown in the world of men. With almost a god-like presence, Sauron was able to corrupt the minds of others through fear.  The most notable of those to fall victim to the influence of the Dark Lord was Saruman. Once known as The White Wizard, Saruman was transcended from one of the mightiest and wisest wizard in all of Middle Earth. However, once he glimpsed the forces of Sauron, he saw no future for those who opposed his will and so forfeited his nobility for malevolence.

Now, back to Théoden. The mighty King of Men had a vassal, Grima. Grima was once a loyal companion to Théoden, but his mortal mind would soon be tainted by the Dark Lord. Working under the orders of Saruman, Grima, gradually poisoned the mind and health of Théoden so that he would be blind to the operations of the Dark Lord within his lands. With Théoden under this spell, the orcs ran free in his lands. Killing anyone in their path and destroying every village they came across, the orcs wreaked havoc on the lands of Rohan. Only one man was brave enough to question the orders of the Théoden: Èomer, his nephew. Grima, who had quickly earned the name Wormtongue amongst the people of Rohan, saw Èomer as a threat to his master’s plans. To rid the Kingdom of this clarity and justice, Wormtongue convinced Théoden to banish Èomer from the Kingdom, never to return.

Heartbroken and angered beyond belief, Èomer honored the wishes of his King, poisoned as he was. However, Èomer was not alone. A group of soldiers still loyal to the true interests of their people, known as the Riders of Rohan, accompanied him in his exile. Traveling as nomadic warriors, the Riders of Rohan sought out and destroyed regiments of orcs that plagued their lands, never losing sight of what they knew their king truly stood for.

File:Rama taking leave of Dasharatha.jpg

Author's Note. I used the story of Rama losing his position and as heir apparent and being exiled at the hands of Manthara. Manthara, not directly related to the King, obstructs his judgment through using a “middleman,” Kaikeyi. In this story, Saruman represents the hunchback, Manthara. Kaikeyi, who persuades the mind of King Dasharatha, is represented by Grima or “Wormtongue”. King Dasharatha is represented by King Théoden. Lastly, the noble man who is wrongly banished, Rama, is represented by Èomer. I found many parallels in these two stories. In both circumstances there are people of great prominence who are liked by all. However, if these stories went unimpeded, the story would be a short “happily ever after” tale. Therefore the authors must place obstacles in front of the protagonist that they must overcome. Rama is put to the ultimate test when he is banished from his father’s kingdom. The rest of the story will show how he responds to misfortunes like this. It is a way for the author to test Rama’s true character, which is simply strengthened. In this way, Manthara serves as the disruption that will complicate Rama’s life. Again, these represent the perpetual battle of good v. evil.

Bibliography:

The Scheming of Kaikeyi, from Myths of the Hindus and Buddhists, by Sister Nivedita (1914)

5 comments:

  1. Okay, first of all, Lord of the Rings is the best. Seriously. I never would have seen the connections between these two things, but after reading your story, I definitely see the similarities! I love how you were able to not only change up the original story, but bring in another story altogether! That's not something I've seen before on this project and it's a very creative idea. Good job!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. I am glad I found another "Lord of the Rings nerd"! I wasn't sure if people would totally get it if they hadn't seen the movies. But I think it's really fun to link these two stories.

      Delete
  2. I think the epic Ramayana has a lot to teach us about life in general, and this was probably one of the main purposes of the epic. You were definitely right in pointing out the main story constructs in the Ramayana like how the stories were not the short "happily ever after" tales that we are used to. I think you did an excellent job with your story! Keep up the good work!

    ReplyDelete
  3. So first let me say, that I love the Lord of the Rings. My boyfriend just bought me every Lord of the Rings movie on DVD so I was super excited to read your story. With that being said... My first question is, Are you going to another story like this, so that the reader can get another view from the perspective of Lord of the Rings? I think that it is interesting that you based this off of Lord of the Rings. After reading through your story, I see where you got the similarities from. I really liked how you linked the two together, so that it would be easy to read and understand for people that have not watched the movies before. I think that was one of the things that I wanted to point out that you did really well while writing this. I think that you should add another story with the Lord of the Rings theme.

    ReplyDelete
  4. I really like how you use Rama’s story as an introduction to a story from Middle Earth. You did a really good job of drawing parallels between the two stories. It’s really interesting that Rama has read Lord of the Rings! When I read the first sentence, I envisioned Sita being physically crushed by a vice. Instead, say that Sita was “emotionally crushed” because of Rama’s banishment. Use a colon instead of a period after the sentence where you say that Rama tells a story. In the Middle Earth story, you did a good job of providing details. I like how you mentioned the names of your characters. I find that characters that are specifically named in stories seem less convincing. I also liked the picture you used at the end of your story. It has a lot of color and is very eye-catching. You could also have a second image of Middle Earth since your story takes place in two worlds. Great story!

    ReplyDelete