Now, news of the birth of Prince Siddhartha had spread joyously
throughout the lands. Throughout his early years he was second to none. The men
admired his strength and agility, the scholars admired his boundless wit, the
women adored his beauty and grace, and the children adored him for his playful
jest. The world was simply a better place after his coming. Beyond just his
peers-the trees grew taller, the grass grew greener, and the birds sang
sweeter. To the Sakya people, the prophecies of their prince's omnipresence
were all too true.
However, the Gods had much more planned
for the young Siddhartha.
Siddhartha's father, Suddhodana, knew that
his son was destined to leave his palace one day for a life of austerity. Now,
this threatened the legacy of his family, and so he did all he could to
entertain Siddhartha and keep him content with his life inside the palace
walls. However, though a mighty king, his will was no match for that of the
Gods.
This became all too true when someone
approached Siddhartha on a quaint Spring morning and described to him the
beauties of a forest rejuvenating after a long winter's rest. Siddhartha was
intrigued and so asked his father if he could take his chariot out and see
these marvelous things.
Suddhodana sent his son out of the gates
with great sorrow, for he knew that this would change the course of their lives
forever. However, before his son left, the king ordered all manners of
suffering, sick, or death to be removed from the streets in order to keep his
son blind from the harshness of life.
Do you remember the Gods and their plans for Siddhartha? The
moment had finally come for their plans to come into action. Annoyed by the short-minded happiness of the Sakya people, they devised plans to expose Siddhartha
to the realities of suffering that took place outside of his lofty palace
walls.
Their first task was to place an old man in the path of Siddhartha’s
chariot. The grey-haired man, with his crippled body and wrinkled skin, hobbled
along the dirt path with the help of his wooden staff. This caught Siddhartha’s
attention and set in motion ripples that would eventually turn into tidal
waves. He could not bear the sight of such suffering, and so returned to the
palace.
However, once back at the palace, he could not get the image of
the old man out of his head. The notion that all people were destined for the
physical, mental, and physiological withering that accompany old age weighed
heavy on his mind and he was unable to enjoy the pleasures of the palace.
Nonetheless, the unsettled Siddhartha decides to journey outside
the palace walls once more. This time, the Gods exposed him to the sufferings of
an ill man. The sight of the man, with his gaunt figure, pale skin, and sad
eyes, gasping for breath on the side of the side of the road filled Siddhartha
with grief. Realizing that he and everyone else were susceptible to illness,
Siddhartha returned home engulfed in his painful thoughts.
Again, the troubled Siddhartha was tormented by these thoughts.
How could he enjoy the pleasures of life when such suffering plagued the world?
Out of a sort of distressed curiosity, Siddhartha decided to
venture beyond the palace walls one more time. This time, the Gods had prepared
the grand finale. They would expose Siddhartha to the realities of death. This
would be the proverbial straw that broke the camel’s back. Once Siddhartha had
come to understand that death was something that awaited all living creatures, the
pleasures of his previous life were forgotten.
From this moment forward, Siddhartha was determined to alleviate
the world of these gruesome sufferings. What his father feared most had finally
come to pass. Siddhartha would leave the luxuries of the palace behind forever in
the pursuit of supreme knowledge. Siddhartha would eventually attain this
supreme knowledge and take on the everlasting title that we know him by
today-Buddha.
Siddhartha Retires into Seclusion: Wiki Commons
Author’s Note. This story is based on The Three Encounters episode
from the The Life of Buddha. This story tells the tale of how Siddhartha
finally makes the transition from the life of a prince to a humble monk. From
his birth it is prophesied that Siddhartha will obtain supreme knowledge and
in him there will be a force that changes the world. I chose this story because it shows that
sometimes people need a little push in the right direction in order to reach
their full potential. I also think another important take away is that it is
often harmful to shelter people too much. If you live in a bubble and are
unaware of what is going on outside of your immediate social circle, you have a
skewed perspective on how things work. It is important to expose yourself to as
much as you can so you can fully understand and appreciate everything that you
have.
Bibliography: The Life of Buddha, by A. Ferdinand Herold, tr. by Paul C Blum [1922], at Sacred Texts. http://sacred-texts.com/bud/lob/lob11.htm
Good work on this story. I did not know about Buddha’s origins as a prince. It appears that you used the wrong form of “hear” in your title. You should also consider adding more details to the action. Instead of saying that Siddhartha encountered a crippled man, you should make the readers feel like they are riding in the chariot with him. Also, I was not familiar with the story, so you should describe which details you changed from the original story.
ReplyDeleteI read this story without having any idea about the original version. I think that you did a really good job with it. I did not know that Buddha had started out as a prince but became a monk once he was exposed to the harshness of life. I found your story was well written and it was easy to read. Overall, I enjoyed it.
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ReplyDeleteWell overall I think this story went quite well. This is the first time I have read something that wasn't really derived from either the Ramayana or the Mahabharata so that was really refreshing. I actually did not know Buddha's origin and much less that he was a prince before becoming a monk. So that was interesting! The only think I could tell you is that you might have meant to put "Hear" instead of "Here" in your title. But good job! I liked this story.
Kurtis,
ReplyDeleteReally great job on the story. I think that you have a gift for (creative) writing. I did not know the origins as Buddha and how he started off as a prince, so it was delightful reading that. I am not really familiar with the story, so I wish that there could have been a little bit more background context on the characters.
What a great story, I know that the secret to life is that death must come after it. I like the way that you have used this story in other storytelling, I think that you are really able to flush the ideas and purpose of the story. I think that death has motivated generation after generation and I agree with you over protective sheltering is not a favor, but rather a curse.
ReplyDeleteHey Kurtis! I think you did a really good job retelling this story in your own words! I love stories about Buddha, or buddha-esque topics. I have not had the fortune to read this story yet, but I might perhaps pick it up now. From your author’s note I can see that you did a good job keeping some detail, but also changing up the story! Spelling looked great and overall I think you did an excellent job on your post!
ReplyDeleteHi Kurtis! I loved this story. It seems like I haven't really read stories about Buddha, so I liked that this story was so different from most I have read lately. It's always entertaining to get a topic or storyline that's new. You did a great job of taking this story and making it your own. I love that your author's note you brought the moral of the story together. I think it really completed it. I think you did a good job of explaining your original story as well, especially for someone like me who had not read it before. Overall, great work.
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